The form of the pages is confusing. There are a lot of informations overlapping. It is difficutl to read. Nothing is catching attention.
There are a lot of informations that influence or not the period, the chosen events are a little random. They can be irrelevant. If there was a real connection, a quick precise description would have been helpful to understand.
The book is western/ europe oriented, it is not representative of past and actual fashion styles worldwide.
Time slots regarding fashion silhouettes and styles are overlapping or too far away from each other.
Cultural/ religious garments referenced as trends that aren't. They are also not representative of the wide variety, it seems that they were picked out randomly, like halloween costumes.